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Thursday, July 30, 2020

The Ice Dragon


Once upon a time a little child was walking on the noisy road. He saw a big light blue dragon.
It was an ice dragon. He tamed the dragon. He flew around the world.
He found a nice flat place to make a big house for them. Then they found a pond.
They gathered some water and put it in the jar then they made a castle.
Once they were finished the castle they had a party to celebrate.

4 comments:

  1. Hello Caleb.
    I was looking forward to reading your wonderful story but it's shooting across the page.Is there any way you can fix it so it goes downwards please?.
    Thanks and have a great week.

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  2. Kia orana Caleb,
    I think you have fixed the problem Mrs Cassidy talked about. It sounds a very positive story and I look forward to reading another one from you.I did wonder why they put water in a jar?

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  4. Hello Caleb.
    I deleted my last comment to you due to a spelling error-YES even adults make mistakes.
    Thank you for correcting your blog.
    I like all the describing words you have used.Well done.They always make a story more interesting to read.Keep up the great work.😉

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