In writing we have been learning about Similes. This is my poem.
My older brother
My older brother is like a chicken
He is as annoying as a rooster
He is as kind as a doctor
He is playful like a puppy
He is as helpful as a cleaner
He is as funny as a clown.
My brother is the best.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Very cool poem Caleb. Well done! I love your similes, you have really thought about your ideas. Ka pai!
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