In writing we had to write about a place
One day I was at Subway. At Subway I got a medium salami, beetroot, cheese, and carrot sandwich. There were a lot of people. They were noisy. I could smell the bread and the chicken cooking. It was a yummy smell.
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Your story transported me Caleb.I felt like I was at Subways experiencing your words.I like the smell of the fresh bread.I usually get garlic bread with pork riblet,spinach and mayonnaise.
ReplyDeleteI look forward to seeing more of your super work.
Have a Merry Christmas.
Good afternoon Caleb.
ReplyDeleteI was just checking your blog to see if you had completed any of the SLJ activities.
What have you been doing these holidays?.
Samantha and I have been fairly busy.We went to mini golf a couple of weeks ago.We then went for a hot chocolate and a piece of cake.
Tomorrow we are hoping to go to Willowbank to feed the lemurs and check out the other animals.
Good afternoon Caleb.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have visited your blog today.
Have a wonderful last week off school.I am looking to hearing about what you have been doing.
All the best.
Hello Caleb.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have checked out your blog tonight.
I am looking forward to seeing your new posts for Term 1.