When I went to the fun run. I got squirted i sat to run. for a we wil then i went to go dun a water slide it was very fast dun the slide I went undo a net I madi it fry the net.
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Tuesday, March 23, 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Caleb,
ReplyDeleteI like all the fall stops. I like the sentence about the water slide. Maybe next time you could describe it all a bit more and remember all of the capitals.