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Tuesday, March 23, 2021

The fun run

 When I went to the fun run. I got squirted i sat to run. for a we wil then i went to go dun a water slide it was very fast dun the slide I went undo a net I madi it fry the net.

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  1. Hi Caleb,
    I like all the fall stops. I like the sentence about the water slide. Maybe next time you could describe it all a bit more and remember all of the capitals.

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