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Thursday, March 25, 2021

Caleb the present

On Monday I was playing Roblox at home with my friends and my cousin Mason, Travel, and Drew and Zander. We were playing Thick Legends.   

Suddenly my mum came straight from work and put a box on the desk right in front of me. I was a wee bit annoyed that mum put it in front of my face when I was playing Thick Legends. Then mum said open up your present. I said “Is it for me?” yes ok thank you. 

I opened the box. I was a little happy I just saw that it only had 3 legs. I felt a wee bit annoyed that it only had three legs. I threw the puppy on the floor and pushed the box on the floor too. The puppy came back to me and barked but I was angry and pushed it with my foot.


 The puppy rolled onto his back and then it saw a ball under the desk and wanted to play with it. He rushed to it and knocked his head on the desk then he went under and gave the ball to me and I kicked it and the puppy ran after it. And it. Tipped over the bowl. I hit it into the box. The puppy ran to the ball. 

I tried to ignore the puppy but it was so adorable.

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3 comments:

  1. Hello Caleb.
    I'm glad that the puppy was loved in the end.The start of your story was sad but the ending was happy.
    We have a puppy (10 years old) at home and we LOVE❤️him with all our heart.I think all animals deserve to be loved and looked after.
    Did you give your puppy a name?.

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  2. A nice piece of writing. Very well done. You have all the ideas in order and have made it interesting. Ka Pai! Please add a photo.

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  3. Hello Caleb.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.

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