I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
SUPER article Caleb! Your writing kept me interested.You used some powerful words that made your writing POP! I really liked how the ship was saved from crashing.Well done to all the villagers for helping Mister Tom.
I also liked the background that you chose.It made your story look more authentic.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say 3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
SUPER article Caleb!
ReplyDeleteYour writing kept me interested.You used some powerful words that made your writing POP!
I really liked how the ship was saved from crashing.Well done to all the villagers for helping Mister Tom.
I also liked the background that you chose.It made your story look more authentic.
I hope you have a wonderful holiday.