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Friday, August 6, 2021

caleb Narrative Planner

In writing  have been making a Narraitve

 Once upon a time there  was Hero Geroge in a haunted house with Anthony.



They were painting the house. This day Anthony said where is the  paint brush?

I would  have a look around the haunted house said Hero George and the other day Hero George and Anthony what back to paint the house when they got to the brushes one of the Plant buckets were gone and the other day Hero George what to wake up Anthony and Anthony was not in his bed Hero Geoge around the area to find Anthony hero George found a door  it was a underground base in the underground base had this cage and ther was Spiky iest to the cage hero George run to spiky and cartertoed him then Spiky tornado kicked hero George till hero George hook kicked spiky in the face. Then  herwant to yeah haunted house and made a mansion.     

1 comment:

  1. Hi caleb i really like your work i looks god.

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