My hook
On your mark get set BANG! Ther I go Numder 42 was spithing Nzen i am at 2nd place I was going to go to but coming down the finish line
I am a student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. I am a Year 5 and my teacher is Ms Clifford. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
My hook
On your mark get set BANG! Ther I go Numder 42 was spithing Nzen i am at 2nd place I was going to go to but coming down the finish line
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something helpful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
On your marks,get set....GO!
ReplyDeleteSwim Caleb swim!.You CAN DO IT.Keep going---
Well done on using a different introduction.It made your writing more interesting to read.
Keep it up and watch out for the sharks.
Talofa Caleb I love your picture because it is an New Zealand ahlete and I love it that you put in a lot of efort in this work.
ReplyDeletebye have a great day
Hi Caleb.
ReplyDeleteI like your picture because that person is representing New Zealand.
I like your starting because it says, On your mark get set band!
Next time you should fix your spelling mistakes and have a bit longer story about this olympic person.
Good afternoon Caleb.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to say thanks for all the posts you have completed.
Well done.
Good morning Caleb.
ReplyDeleteI hope all is going well for you and your family during this extended break from school.
Keep safe,warm and take care.