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Wednesday, August 11, 2021

My hook

 My hook


On your mark get set BANG! Ther I go Numder 42 was spithing Nzen i am at 2nd place I was going to go to but  coming down the finish line







5 comments:

  1. On your marks,get set....GO!

    Swim Caleb swim!.You CAN DO IT.Keep going---

    Well done on using a different introduction.It made your writing more interesting to read.
    Keep it up and watch out for the sharks.

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  2. Talofa Caleb I love your picture because it is an New Zealand ahlete and I love it that you put in a lot of efort in this work.

    bye have a great day

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  3. Hi Caleb.
    I like your picture because that person is representing New Zealand.
    I like your starting because it says, On your mark get set band!
    Next time you should fix your spelling mistakes and have a bit longer story about this olympic person.

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  4. Good afternoon Caleb.
    I am just leaving a comment to say thanks for all the posts you have completed.
    Well done.

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  5. Good morning Caleb.
    I hope all is going well for you and your family during this extended break from school.
    Keep safe,warm and take care.

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