Persuasive Writing Caleb

                  we are learning to write persuasive arguments.              

The heart is the most important part of the body

 

In writing we have been learning and writing about what we think is the most important part of your body. 

                                            

                                                   The heart is the most important part

                                              I think the  heart is the most important body part because it pumps up the blood. 

I  think the heart is the most because It keeps you moving.

I think the heart is the most because

Your heart is sort of like a pump, or two pumps in one. The righ

place

 

In writing we had to write about a place   

         One day I was at Subway. At Subway I got a medium salami, beetroot, cheese, and carrot sandwich. There were a  lot of people. They were noisy. I could smell the bread and the chicken cooking. It was a yummy smell.

Animals

In writing we have been writing about animals  

           I saw a cobra in my back yard. It was moving in my backyard and it started to move. I started slowly to move away. It didn't see me look at it. Then I wanted to get away. It didn't attack me.

patterns

 

                           

In topic we have been learning about patterns. 

                 

The heart is the most important part in the body.

       

We had to choose a part of the body that we thought was most important. I chose the heart.

                     The heart is the most important part in the

                                                                      body

I think the  heart is the most important body part

 because it pumps up the blood. 

I  think the heart is the most important because it keeps you moving.

Your heart makes the blood get oxygen to keep you alive which is really important.

I think the heart is the most important part in the body

The Best Animals In The World

 In writing we had to write about the animal we thought was the best.

The best Animals in the world are birds

I think birds are the best animals

Birds are the best because they have many different colours. Birds can see the world from above.

Birds can sit on a skinny branch.

The best Animals in the world are birds